Half-Arsed Haiku – Sun 22 March 2015


On Heading Home

we see arrows fly
across flint blue sky, each takes
their turn at the tip

Linked to Carpe Diem Haiku a day, Writing Techniques No 12 , Baransu


One comment

  1. Yer Forest Pirate · March 28, 2015

    There is somethng so powerful about this,perhaps because it leaves so much to interpretaton, as well as being such a good observation of nature. Maybe a touch of Tengriism about it as well. Nice one. Keep them coming


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