Half-Arsed Haiku – Mon 2 February 2015

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(c)Notsalmon.com

On Seeing Your Smile Falter For a Moment When You Think No-one is Looking

A shadow flickers
across your face. Unguarded,
a dark thought roams free.

Linked to Carpe Diem Haiku a Day #130 Fuyuko Tomita’s Shadow and Karen Salmansohn

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2 comments

  1. Chèvrefeuille · February 3, 2015

    Wow … nice haiku with a very deep layer hidden in it … I like this one a lot. It’s close to the one I gave.

    Like

  2. girl friday · February 5, 2015

    good one. Yes, you are what you think and even worse, you are what you think others think of you.
    Ever noticed how one’s personaiity takes on a different slant towards different people in your life?
    I love your title concept.

    Like

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